"All day it shouldhave rained in the grey cloud-light"it was just like that here today! well said --
Christine, this is a great poem! You've mixed the ordinary, everyday routines into the essence of life!! This is now my favorite Christine poem!!p.s. if Terry didn't take so many naps he could write more songs!!
A poem poignant and rich with meaningful analogy. ^_^ It reminds me: time, with its passing, can stretch the 'distance' between people all too familiar with each other. *wistful sigh*
ooooh cicadas :) very nice
Andrew, thanks!Pat, I'm glad you like this one. I'll have to go wake Terry up and tell him you want him to stop napping!Soulless, what a lovely read of this poem. Thank you for giving that to me.Ruthanne, I'm glad you liked it.
I love the poem. It beautifullyintertwines multiple layers of meaning that create the captivating aura of this piece.
wowww!beautiful & romantic
Natalia, thank you. This is one of my favorite poems, so I'm very pleased that it spoke to you.Kai, thank you!
What a piece Christine..I have just read it.. and its lovely!So many layers and so very poignant..Sangeet
Sangeet, thank you for stopping by and your kind words. I'm glad you liked this one. :-)
i know i already commented on this one, but i dont think i saw the photo the first time. is that a real photo?? with the hole in the clouds like that? amazing
Ruthanne, yup, it's a real photo. I took it at dusk and the sun was shining thru the clouds. Thanks for coming back!
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